bagrisham 0 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 BTTF Part IV By: Brandon Grisham -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- You see the ending for bttf 3 and then you see this: THE END (is displayed). Fades. OR IS IT? (is displayed). Fades. A clock starts ticking. Wednesday, March 4th, 2015, 7.25pm. (is displayed). Int. McFly Household. The camera fixes on an old fashioned clock with a man dangling from the hands. The camera pans around the sitting room to reveal Marty Senior (47) and Jennifer (47) who are sitting watching television. They no longer live in Hilldale as in Back to the Future part II. Instead they live in a large fairly expensive house. It is also noticeable that 2015 as depicted in Back to the Future part II when Marty, Doc & Jennifer visited, isn’t as futuristic as it was. Marty is a retired Rockstar, and the camera pans around the room showing platinum discs, Rolling Stone magazine and other such awards are dotted around the room. The camera moves to show Marty looking at the old photograph he has with Doc standing by the Courthouse clock in 1885. MARTY SENIOR Can you believe Jen, its 2015 already? I mean the time’s gone so quick since Doc left in the train with his family. I really thought he would’ve come back to live in the present. JENNIFER Well, you remember all that trouble with the FBI over the missing plutonium and those awful terrorists back in 1985. You had one hell of a job shaking them off. Doc would’ve probably have been arrested if he came back to live in this time. MARTY SENIOR Maybe he thought it was for the best. Anyway I don’t think Clara would’ve felt at home a hundred years ahead of her time, and Doc always dreamt of living in the old west. I wonder how it all turned out for him. Things certainly made a difference without him today. The time we visited 2015 back then there were flying cars and all sorts. Doc must have been a major influence or invented something pretty big in that alternative reality to have made it so futuristic. JENNIFER Look at us then Marty, our lives turned out completely different. If it weren’t for you avoiding that awful accident with the Rolls Royce in 1985, we’d have been living in Hilldale. We would’ve married in the Chapel of Love! Imagine that? MARTY SENIOR Don’t even think about it. I’d have never been as successful as I was. JENNIFER You would’ve injured your hand and never played guitar again. MARTY SENIOR The thought of that makes me shudder. JENNIFER More importantly, we’d have only had two kids. We wouldn’t have had much money and struggled by bringing the two of them up. If it wasn’t for your rock career, we never would’ve had Scott. He’d never have even been born. MARTY SENIOR Life without Scott? Geez Jen that would’ve been so different. Where are the kids anyway? JENNIFER Marlene’s at her friends doing her homework and Junior and Scott should be in their rooms doing there’s. MARTY SENIOR I’m gonna go check on Scott, I bet he’s playing that damn video game again. Marty heads to the door. Int. Scott’s bedroom. Posters of skateboarders and rockstars are on the wall. There is a skateboard leaning against the wall. Scott (15) is sitting on his bed playing his video game as Marty suspected. He’s playing a flight simulator game and is really good at it. After several moments of Scott cursing and making the usual sounds you make playing a video game, Marty enters the room. MARTY SENIOR I knew it Scott, playing that damn game again. Why aren’t you doing your homework? SCOTT Aw Dad… MARTY SENIOR Come on son, you know how much your grades are slipping; I don’t want to see another report like the one you got last semester. Get on with it. SCOTT I can’t, my laptop is malfunctioning. MARTY SENIOR Can’t you use you palmtop? SCOTT It takes too long to use that. MARTY SENIOR You’ve still gotta do your homework; it’s not an option. I’ll go and get my laptop; you can do it on that. SCOTT Aww. Marty goes off to fetch his laptop. Scott gets up, switches his game off, picks up a school bag and takes the work he needs to do out of it. Marty soon returns with the laptop and gives it to Scott. MARTY SENIOR Now get on with it. No excuses, I’m gonna check on you shortly to make sure you’re doing it. Marty turns and leaves the room and Scott pulls a face. Int. living room. Jennifer has prepared drinks. Marty enters the room and takes his drink. MARTY SENIOR Cheers Jen, he’s hard work sometimes. What were you saying about him not even being born? JENNIFER You wouldn’t have him any other way Marty, he’s just like you were at his age. Int. Scott’s room. Scott plays around with his dad’s laptop. Instead of getting on with his homework he’s snooping around his dad’s files. He finds a folder called “Personal”. He clicks it open and finds another folder called “Do not open until 2016”. Scott looks round to see if anybody’s coming in the room and opens it inquisitively. The folder opens and reveals a file called “My journeys back to the future by Marty McFly”. Scott scrolls down and sees words like “1955”, “Doc” and “Time Machine” and illustrations of DeLorean cars and Flux Capacitors. SCOTT This looks interesting… Scott looks round again to see if anybody’s coming and proceeds to copy the file onto his palmtop computer. Fade into opening credits. Back to the Future Part IV logo appears on the screen to the Back to the Future theme tune. Thats just the begining of it, but I hope you liked it. __________________ BAGRISHAM"S TUTORIALS IS ON YOUTUBE! LOOK IT UP! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Carlos_McFly 7 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 Good story, but, why marty's son is named Scott? What happened with Marty Jr. and Marlene? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CJ O'Hummer 10 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 Haven't you read it?!? Scott is Marty's and Jen's third child which they didn't have in BTTF2. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
archer9234 20 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 The future changed Marty Jr. and Marline could easily not exist. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daniel 1 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 Due, that was pretty good! You shoukd do more Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dragon King 15 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 ah Archer, but they DO exist. The only thing that changed was Jr and Marlene didn't go to prison. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CJ O'Hummer 10 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 The future changed Marty Jr. and Marline could easily not exist. they DO exist. @Archer: DK's right about that, even because they BOTH were mentioned in the "script". Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chamyto 0 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 I found it interesting, though I think the Doctor Emmett L. Brown continues in 1985, because according to the animated series (which is a continuation) they are living in 1991, it was found interesting and creative. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hscitpe 6 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 TAS sucks balls. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
archer9234 20 Report post Posted November 6, 2010 That's what I get for not reading. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Flux Capacitor 0 Report post Posted November 7, 2010 SCOTTY BOY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joe Statler 0 Report post Posted November 8, 2010 (edited) ...according to the animated series (which is a continuation) they are living in 1991... Bob Gale has said time and time again, it is not canon. Meaning it is not an official continuation of the three movies. He's always considered TAS and the ride to take place in an alternate reality of BTTF. He even says that the game won't be canon... Edited November 8, 2010 by Joe Statler Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Flux Capacitor 0 Report post Posted November 8, 2010 Why the f**k can't they make the game like the first 3 movies? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EarthwormJim 1 Report post Posted November 9, 2010 (edited) thats the bttf4 fanfiction that continues on into 5 and 6. you didnt come up with this bagrisham. dont try and claim other peoples ideas as your own scott is supposedly marty and jennifers third child who they didnt have in the 2015 in bttf2 because they couldnt afford to raise a third kid. he ends up dating a female tannen and they steal the delorean that marty and doc hide in the alleyway during the whole cafe 80s thing and end up screwing up events AGAIN by pulling up behind marty when hes racing needles so when he hits reverse he crashes into the delorean, breaks his hand and the delorean is sent to 2050 or somthing with the kids inside. its a pretty good read but i wouldnt want to see movies made of them http://webspace.webring.com/people/wm/mikey7t4/ PART IV http://webspace.webring.com/people/nb/backtothefuture5/ PART V http://www.facebook.com/board.php?uid=154247496759 PART VI its in parts on a fb discussion board Edited November 9, 2010 by EarthwormJim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Flux Capacitor 0 Report post Posted November 9, 2010 BTTF4 is never gonna happen anyway, and it p**ses me off when people make s**tty fanfics that have NOTHING to do with the movie. (example: Doc lets Teen and Adult Marty interact in one of the story suggestions for the BTTF game) Doc would never, and I repeat, NEVER let them interact. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the matster 1 Report post Posted November 10, 2010 Yeah just watching the films tells you that. Doc goes mad about screwing up events. The consequences could be disastrous. I dont know anything about the actual plot of the game but i was hoping it would follow the films. It`s just gonna be like playing a game of a non-existing bttf 4. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Black Swordsman 1 Report post Posted November 19, 2010 The fact that people even want a BTTF4 still amazes me. Then they complain about mediocre sequels... then stop requesting them. I like that Gale and Zemeckis refuse. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CJ O'Hummer 10 Report post Posted November 19, 2010 your sig's too big (height of 181 pixels, maximum is 150 pixels) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dragon King 15 Report post Posted November 19, 2010 indeed it is. change it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the matster 1 Report post Posted November 19, 2010 He either hasnt seen this or is ignoring it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mr.Kocher 1 Report post Posted November 20, 2010 not a bad story, but I think marty senior should use the word heavy a lot more, since he's marty. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
♠Grim♂ Reaper 1666◙ 17 Report post Posted November 28, 2010 part 4 is in theory telltales game. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daniel 1 Report post Posted November 28, 2010 its a pretty good read but i wouldnt want to see movies made of them http://webspace.webring.com/people/wm/mikey7t4/ PART IV http://webspace.webring.com/people/nb/backtothefuture5/ PART V http://www.facebook.com/board.php?uid=154247496759 PART VI its in parts on a fb discussion board These are pretty entertaining to read! But you're right. I wouldn't see them being made into movies. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
